A students who get a high score of examination is more duo to its hard study than IQ 2 分钟前 提问者

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A students who get a high score of examination is more duo to its hard study than IQ 2 分钟前 提问者
A students who get a high score of examination is more duo to its hard study than IQ
成为一个好学生努力学习要比智商重要!把its拿掉可以吗?

句子问题很大哦,更正如下:
A student who gets a high score in an exam is more due to his hard work than (his) IQ.
A students前后单复数不一;
定语从句中的get要和前面的主语保持数的一致;
exam前面用in,而且它也是可数名词;
英语中一般用he代指泛指的某人,所以后面用his;
study做名词时,一般不用hard study这个短语.
翻译:考试拿高分的学生,更多是由于他的努力学习而不是智商.