英语语法改错

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英语语法改错
I brought all these belongs from home,yet now I feel half of the dorm room is my own.This has helped me feel secure during my first months in a new environment.My roommate has personalized his side of the room by hooking up all his electronic equipment.His stereo,CDs,VCR,DVDplayer,and TVdefine his strong interest in technology.

I brought all these belongings from home,yet now I feel half of the dorm room is my own.This has helped me feel secure during my first months in a new environment.My roommate has personalized his shar...