作文求修改好的追分!英语作文!
作文求修改好的追分!英语作文!
I am very glad to have received your letter.you asked my about my life on weekends.now I will tell you something about it.as you can see,I am very busy on weekends.i have to do many homework and join lots of out-of-school activities.Sometimes,I also do some housework to help my Mom.in my free time,I will go shopping with my friends,I think it not only do I love to but It is a good way to spend time staying with friends.what a great thing!although my weekends is enrich enough,I believe that many people has more relax weekends.i hope my weekends will more relaxed like others and i wish students to spend their weekends without homework.that's all.and how do you spend your weekends?please write to me soon.yours,lucy.
c我希望可以详细点出错误。并且给点指导！
I am very glad to have received your letter.you asked my about my life on weekends.now I will tell you something about it.as you can see,I am very busy on weekends.i have to do many(many--much) homework and join (join---join in)lots of out-of-school activities.Sometimes,I also do some housework to help my Mom.in my free time,I will go shopping with my friends,I think it(加上is) not only (because)do(去掉do) I love to but It is a good way to spend time staying with friends.what a great thing!although my weekends is enrich(改为rich) enough,I believe that many people has (has--have)more relax(relax--relaxing) weekends.i hope my weekends will(加上be) more relaxed (relax---relaxing)like others and i wish students to spend their weekends without homework.that's all.and how do you spend your weekends?please write to me soon.