找出短文中的错误并改正(急)

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找出短文中的错误并改正(急)
Maria loved to look at the star.And when the night was clearly, she would do that. Maria's father wasnb't pleased with her interest. He ever gives her a telescope so that she could see the stars better. Maria interest in the stars grew. She watched the stars more or more. She append many time looking at the sky. At half past ten in the night of October 1,1847,she found a new comet. Soon she was askingto wrote books about them.
一共有十个错误.

第一行star 改为stars
clearly改为clear
wasn’t改为was
第二行末,改为Maria‘s
第三行more and more后加often
many改为much
第四行 night of October 改为 night on October
was asking to改为 was asked to