帮我修改英语日记
帮我修改英语日记
Yesterday I was tired beacus I did all of housework.So my home looked clean.When my mom comed back home and noticed it,it made her happy.So my mom kissed me and made dlicious meal .When my mom praised me,I also felt happy .Though I devoted tear and hard,I still felt happy.If I didn't do it ,today's life will be boring!Why?Beause the life lies in exercise ,and happiness lies in giving.
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Yesterday I was tired after I finished dong all my housework.My home looked clean.When my mom came back home and noticed this,she felt very happy and kissed me.She made dlicious meal for me as well.When she praised me,I also felt happy .Though I devoted tears and hard work,I still felt happy.If I didn't do that,my life will be boring,for our life needs exercise ,and happiness comes from giving.