Jumbo versu police (中译英) 大家帮我看看哪有错吧,

Jumbo versu police (中译英) 大家帮我看看哪有错吧,
因为我现在是先听写了很多次达到基本能听写出来之后,第二天又中译英的,这样有可能会出现句子与原文相同的情况,要是一直就这样译呢,又觉得太快了,里面有些生词,要查字典才能知道,写完之后又忘记了.所以 不知道这样效果会不会好些呢.
Thursday November 25th 2010 Cloudy
Last Christmas,the boss of circus,Jimmy Gates decided to send some presents to a children’s hospital.He dressed up as Father Christmas and set off along the main street by riding a elephant called Jumbo,accompanied by a guard of honor of six pretty girl.
He should have known the police didn’t allow this sort of thing.A policeman came up and told Jimmy you should go along a small street,Because Jumbo held up the traffic.Though jimmy agreed to go at once,Jumbo refused to remove.15 Policemen did their best to push Jumbo off the street.Though policeman had a difficult time,they felt that is interesting.“Jumbo must be a few tons.” Afterwards,a policeman said.“It was happy that jumbo didn’t let us carry him away.Of course,we should arrest him.But as he had good records,we let him off this time.”