有没有英语达人可以帮个忙,修改一下语法错误了

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有没有英语达人可以帮个忙,修改一下语法错误了
Memorandum
To:Accounting staff
Cc:ACME’s President
From:ACME’s Accounting manager
Date:April 1 2010
Subject:Friday office hours change
Management team decided to change office hours for summer in order to improve employee morale which has been poor on April 1st.All the staffs can leave office for two hours earlier except customer – service department on each Friday.Here are the details:
Old office hours schedule:Monday 8:30 AM 5:00PM
Tuesday 8:30 AM 5:00PM
Wednesday 8:30 AM 5:00PM
Thursday 8:30 AM 5:00PM
Friday 8:30 AM 5:00PM
New office hours schedule:Monday 8:30 AM 5:00PM
Tuesday 8:30 AM 5:00PM
Wednesday 8:30 AM 5:00PM
Thursday 8:30 AM 5:00PM
Friday 8:30 AM 3:00PM
Our department needs an employee for providing basic service on each Friday.One of you four will be stay until 5:00pm.Please me an e-mail or talk to me which Friday you prefer to leave early this week.I will post the time schedule about Friday schedule to you after that.

MemorandumTo:Accounting staffCc:ACME’s PresidentFrom:ACME’s Accounting managerDate:April 1 2010Subject:change office's hours on fridayManagement team decided to change office hours for summer so tha...