大家帮忙看下我的英语作文,帮我改下,可能会有很多错误,越快越好!

大家帮忙看下我的英语作文,帮我改下,可能会有很多错误,越快越好!
A survey shows that about 20% of the students have a bad habit of not having breakfast.That’s because lots of students always stay up
for studing,so they get up late,they have no time to eat breakfast.And some parents give money to students,ask them to buy
breakfast on their own,but some students use the money to play computer games,so they have no money to buy breakfast.In fact,most of them have no time to eat breakfast.If we don't eat breakfast,we will get sick,and we won’t have enough energy to have lessons,so our marks will fall down.We should eat breakfast everyday,it’s good for our bodys and it makes us have enough energy.Please eat breakfast,why not?
灌水，不懂英语的就别来了，精通英语的帮我改下吧！谢谢了！