小孩写篇作文,不知道语法（句型）等有没有错误?Goodbye,primary school.I will leave you soon.I willmiss you forever.Goodbye,dear teachers,thank you for teaching me forsix years.When I was down,you encouraged me and comforted me.You told me,”don’tbe proud!” when I succeeded.Goodbye,dear classmates,thank you for being with mefor six years.Thank you for bringing me joy and happiness.Which made me becamelively and cheerful.Goodbye,dear playground,you recorded mypassions.Goodbye,d

小孩写篇作文,不知道语法（句型）等有没有错误?
Goodbye,primary school.I will leave you soon.I willmiss you forever.
Goodbye,dear teachers,thank you for teaching me for
six years.When I was down,you encouraged me and comforted me.You told me,”don’t
be proud!” when I succeeded.
Goodbye,dear classmates,thank you for being with me
for six years.Thank you for bringing me joy and happiness.Which made me became
lively and cheerful.
Goodbye,dear playground,you recorded my
passions.Goodbye,dear flowers and trees,you brought me a good mood everyday
and a good learning environment.
Goodbye,primary school.I am leaving you,but you willalways stay in my heart.