请高手帮我看下这些句子的语法,The cat's eyes are greenIt's ten to nine p.m John is in Suzhou ,he is studying English nowJohn usually study English at nine o'clock in the eveningBeijing is the capital of ChinaThe book is not hersAre these books yours?I will come here this week

The cat's eyes are green 你这个没问题。 不过 我们一般写的是 the eyes of cat are green
It's ten to nine p.m John is in Suzhou ,he is studying English now 你这个也没问题。 一般出现具体的时间 几乎都是过去时态， 因为在你写这个的时候 时间就不是 差10分9点了。
*it was ten to nine p.m. john was in suzhou, but now, he is studying english
John usually study English at nine o'clock in the evening 没大问题， 忘记用单3了
* John usually studys English at nine o'clock in the evening
Beijing is the capital of China
The book is not hers
Are these books yours?
I will come here this week
没问题 很不错的。 应该说一点问题都没， 我给你改的那几句 只是为了让你注意下 以后根据语境写时态。

study改studies这样就全对了。继续努力

第三句 study改为studies
剩下都对

首先，我想告诉你，作为一个新手，你的英语很出色！
只有一出问题，其他都可以。
John usually study(s) English at nine o'clock in the evening.(John用第三人称动词，也可用一般过去式studied)
继续加油吧！

The cat's eyes are green
答：少了句号.
改：The cat's eyes are green.
It's ten to nine p.m John is in Suzhou ,he is studying English now
答：少了句号.两句之间用and并列,或用分号也可以,逗号不能连接两个句子.
改：It's ten to nine p.m.John is in Suzhou.He is studying English now.
或：It's ten to nine p.m.John is in Suzhou and he is studying English now.
或：It's ten to nine p.m.John is in Suzhou ; he is studying English now.
John usually study English at nine o'clock in the evening
答：少了句号.主语为第三扔称单数时,一般现在时,谓语动词用S形.
改:John usually studies English at nine o'clock in the evening.
Beijing is the capital of China
The book is not hers
答：少了句号.
改:Beijing is the capital of China.
改:The book is not hers.
Are these books yours?
对!
I will come here this week
答：1.少了句号.
2.时态与时间状语this week 不配.这个星期,包括周一到周日的时间.不是纯将来的时间,有纯将来时态不妥.
3.这个come here 用在“我”上,不合逻辑.因为你就在这儿,还说将来这儿吗?
改：I will come here again next week.下个星期我还要来这里.
楼上的几位是在鼓励你.其实,标点符号,大小写也是很重要的,有时,不同的标点,大小写的不同,会有不同的意思,这也是语法.从一开始就要注意.