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短文改错 高一 多多帮忙
Dear Li Xiao jun, I'm glad to receive your letter.I'd like to disscuss the problem ---- with you.It is true that some video games is good for your ---- thinking ability and they can sometimes make you felt relased ---- Therefore,you are spending too much time on that. ---- You are not little boy any more.You should learn to control yourself. ---- Why not to try to finish your homework first every day ---- and then spend a little time play some video games. I think, ---- like a student,the most important thing is to study hard at school. ---- You should try your best to get good grade in your ---- subjects and try to become a useful person for the future. ----

Dear Li Xiao jun,I'm glad to receive your letter.I'd like to disscuss the problem ----对 with you.It is true that some video games is good for your ----is改为are thinking ability and they can sometime...