英语语法检验请各位高人指点一下这段话里有没有什么语法错误,应该怎么改.hold on to our dreamdo the best you cancherish everyday's lifejust like cherish those happy days when we were togethertake good care of your bodyjust like i am going nowhere only be with youbelieve in yourself just like how i believe youdo not forget how much i like youdo not distrustjust to do without hesitationthe only things that i can doare waiting for you and deeply praying for younever regretall these we do are
英语语法检验
请各位高人指点一下这段话里有没有什么语法错误,应该怎么改.
hold on to our dream
do the best you can
cherish everyday's life
just like cherish those happy days when we were together
take good care of your body
just like i am going nowhere only be with you
believe in yourself just like how i believe you
do not forget how much i like you
do not distrust
just to do without hesitation
the only things that i can do
are waiting for you and deeply praying for you
never regret
all these we do are for our dreams
个人觉得把两个just like改为just as比较好,其他应该OK
believe yourself just like how i believe in you
稍微改变，强调我对你的信任
很不错哦,有点小问题：
把第三排改成cherish everyday
把第六排改成just like I was gone everywhere only be with you
把倒数第五排改成just do it without hesitation
后面的改成the things that I can do are
waiting for you and deeply pray for you and never regret
All these we do are for the sake of our dreams
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