Do you know about Thomas Edison?The following article may give some more details about Thomas Edison.

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Do you know about Thomas Edison?The following article may give some more details about Thomas Edison.
Thomas Edison was a great inveror in the world .He was born in America in 1847.When he had studied in schoolfor only three months ,her mum take he home.Edison studied by himself.He was interested in science.Although he encountered many difficulties when he inventing bu himself,he never gave up.
By his hard work,he had a lab of his own.Than he invented electric light,one of the most important invention in his while life.
Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.What a great inventor Edison is!
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inveror改成inventor
When he had studied in schoolfor only three months ,her mum take he home.改成 After he had studied in school for only three months,his mother took him home.
bu himself---- by himself
Than he invented electric light-- then he invented an electric bulb
one of the most important invention in his while life.---- one of the most important inventions in his whole life.