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这个作文是我们最近的作文题目,下面的是我的作文哦
My View on Campus Security
As is known to us all,campus security has been a topic many people pay great attention to.From my point of view,I think campus security seriously affect students school life.Because of the campus crime,the quiet environment of study is broken.Sometimes,It may cause property loss.What's worse,It may hurt students themselves.Moreover,under the poor security,students have to live and study in fear.They couldn't study by heart.
In my opinion,there are several ways to improve the campus security.First of all,students should strengthen security awareness.They should learn how to protect themselves.Secondly,school has to strengthen safety management on the campus.Some equipment should be installed on the campus.Thirdly,school can make some warning signs on the campus.These signs could not only remind people to be careful,but also warn those who want to commit a crime to stop.
Let's do some things to solve the security problems step by step.
评语：文章结构严谨,词类丰富,未发现拼写错误,同时过渡词和衔接词也很丰富 (这个是提交后滴评语哦,作文是完全手打滴,