英语语法问题,帮忙看看这篇作文有没有问题（日记）
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英语语法问题,帮忙看看这篇作文有没有问题（日记）
Today many activities,so we all got up early
Today we are going to go in the first place is twenty-second session of Tsingtao brewstery Festival Entertainment District,we first arrived at old address,now there is a parking lot,then by bus because I went past,the Dalian,so there are recreational facilities I have played,only playing a rocket bungee jumping,too stimulation.
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Today(加we had) many activities, so we all got up early(Today we are going to go in the first place is 这句要重新整理: The first place we were going today was the) twenty-second session of Tsingtao br...