帮我改正下面话的语法错误
问题描述:
帮我改正下面话的语法错误
This paragraph written very vivid.Embodies the otto cute and ignorance,Jo goodness,so I like these two pages.
答
第一句好像有点问题This paragraph is written very vividly. 这样会不会好点呢!段落应该是被写的,应用被动语态,而vivid是动词,这里需要一个副词来形容be written ,所以加上ly
因为我的能力有限第二句不太看得明白,希望对你有帮助吧!