短文改错 10处错误!
短文改错 10处错误!
I'd like to telling you something about my hometown Zhengzhou.The city stood on the bank of the Yellow River.It is the besutiful place for people to live in.Iis economy has been developing rapid in the past ten years.New factories,houses and roads have built.Many schools and hospitals have been built for its people.Therefore,there are still some problem ,such as air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours.On my opinion ,Zhengzhou should be brought under control so that we'll have a more better hometown in the future
telling - tell
stood - stands
to live in - to live
it's the besutiful place - it's a besutiful place
Iis(its) economy has been developing(developped) rapid(ly) in the past ten years.
New factories,houses and roads have (been) built
there are still some problem(s)
On(In) my opinion
Zhengzhou should be brought (bring) under control