哪位高人能帮我看看我的英语自我介绍有没有语法问题,帮我改改
哪位高人能帮我看看我的英语自我介绍有没有语法问题,帮我改改
Good afternoon,teachers.I'm very glad to introduce my self here.My name is xxxx.I'm a lovely girl.I'm a x years old.I'm a student of Shi Yan primary school.I'm a Class Two Great Six.I like my class very much.In my class ,we help each other,we learn together.I'm very happy.I like reading,playing games and lestening to music.I also like learning,especially learning English.Because English is very interesting,I study English hard ,so my English is very good.I believe that I well do well in the future.Iwon't let you down.Thanks for your listening.
第一行 myself应该连起来.
第二行 old 后面应该有一个girl 班级class前“a”改成"in"
第三行 help each other后的逗号改成and
第五行 interesting后逗号变成句号
最后一行 i well 改成 i will ,do well 改成do better i won't 要分开写要不要加上什么词，让他更完整我觉得按照你的水平来讲已经很好了，内容很详实。打分的话起码90+最后一句是不是 I believe that I will do better in the future是的