请帮我看看这段英语有语法问题吗?

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请帮我看看这段英语有语法问题吗?
I have received 100 vouchers of moon cake,total cost is Rmb5000.I will charge to abc client,please approve.Thanks.
中文背景是:我已经收到100张月饼券了,费用一共是5000元.我会问ABC客户收取这些费用,请批准.

I have received 100 vouchers of moon cake,total cost is Rmb5000.有两个动词,应该分成两个句子,要用句号.I will charge to abc client,please approve.Thanks.同样问题charge to abc client 应该去掉to...