英语作文:我的家庭问题

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英语作文:我的家庭问题
My Family
I have a happy family.I and my parents,my grandparents,my little sister live together.My father is an Office staff,My mother is a doctor,And my grandparents are farmers,I'm a student.My sister is four years old.She is very cute.I love my family.
请各位大侠指点有什么不足之处,帮我修改下哈

第二句把I放到最后吧,and I