请问以下问题是否表达清晰,是否存在语法错误?

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请问以下问题是否表达清晰,是否存在语法错误?
what if Richard has a voice recorder,and he has recorded about what his father said about 200 dollars as allowance per week stuff,and Richard goes to the court,and sued his Father for violating the promises,will he win the case or not,and why?

把第一个about去掉就基本可以了