帮忙修改我今天的写的初二英语作文

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帮忙修改我今天的写的初二英语作文
英语作文:以生活方式为题.
so you see,i'm unhealthy.i don't like vegetables at all.i never exercise.but i want to get good p.e.grades.who can helps me with my health.
my p.e.teache say,we need drink water or milk every day,and eat vegetables at least 4 times a week .it is good for our health.as for sleeping.we must sleep 8 hours every night.exercise is interesting.if we want to be strong,we need exercise every morning.by the way.you can be clever and strong.
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我来答,你等着.需要点时间.so,you see,i'm unhealthy.i don't like vegetables at all.i never take (exercise是名次,前面要加个动词)exercise.but i want to get good P.E.grades.who can helps me with my health...