下面这句话,根据全句的意思如何在...consideration,后面加这一句最合适的中心句子?
下面这句话,根据全句的意思如何在...consideration,后面加这一句最合适的中心句子?
After careful consideration,to begin with,in response to this phenomenon of re-offending,the authorities should establish relevant law or regulation to ensure repeated occurrence of similar events.
翻译：经过仔细考率,（这里缺少一个中心句）首先,国家需要制定相关法律法规来减少类似事件的重复发生.
全段：
After careful consideration,to begin with,in response to this phenomenon of re-offending,the authorities should establish relevant law or regulation to ensure repeated occurrence of similar events.For example,increase the money of fines and extend time of detention,then that ones can alert those people who reach the expiration of the im*ment are released from *,which pay attention to the motivation of repeat an offense.在After careful consideration,后面缺少一句主旨句，这个句子怎么写？
我不太理解你的问题.但是你的理解似乎少了 to begin with 所要表达的“作为第一步,作为开始”等的意思.我觉得这句话是对的,语法也是完整的.但是,逻辑上有失误,因为主句似乎是要保证类似事情重复发生（to ensure repeated occurence of similar events).是否需要考虑把 ensure 改称 eliminate 之类的词?After careful consideration,(这个位置加一句话，起到概括全段以及下面 to begin with, 举例的内容，我怎么也想不起来这句话怎么写）从语法和逻辑上看，已经是完整的了。但是，看你自己所要表达的意思，你可以再加东西。比如你后面说的“*/国家应该。。。。”，你可以加一句话说明“你认为/建议。。。。”。只是需要注意后面的就变成了一个从句。在选词上就需要相应地表现出来。比如：I strongle suggest that..., I believe that....等等。