帮忙找下文章的错误(英语高手请进)
帮忙找下文章的错误(英语高手请进)
several days ago,I asked my friend,"If you can make a dream come ture,which dream do you want?" A few seconds later,he answered,"I want to stay with my dearest forever." Most of us will think he must stay with his girlfriend.But to my surprise,he said,"I want to stay with my parents forever if I can.I will reciprocate them and try my best to make them live a happy life.I shocked for a long time.
As we know,our parents foster us without any grumble.They spend the most patience teaching us,They devote all themselves to us.They must be our dearest.
I think we should give our most respectable to them,comprehension them and when they are tired,give them a cup of tea or care for them more.In a word,I think we should try our best to make them happier and without any pity.
这是我自己写的,希望高手们能找一些错误.
Several days ago, I asked a friend,"If you can make a dream come ture,which dream would you want?" A few seconds later,he answered,"I'd want to stay with my dearest forever." Most of us would think he was talking about his girlfriend. But to my surprise,he said,"I want to stay with my parents forever if I can.I will reciprocate them and try my best to help them live a happy life. I was shocked for a long time.As we know,our parents foster us without any grumble.They are patient to teach us, and devote all themselves to us. They must be our dearest.I think we should give our most respect to them, help them and when they are tired. In a word, I think we should try our best to make them happy. 大致就是这样吧.其中一些说法是不通的.比如关于tea,还有comprehension的用法. 自己对照一下.