Dear John,

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Dear John,
I go to a new middle school in Wenzhou now .I like it very much.I’m making a lot of friends.
I’m studying new subjects,such as Chinese,math,English and science.I think Chinese is very interesting,and I am good at it.I like it because it’s only about 2 homework.We’re talking somethings and learning how to read a passage,they’re help us a life.
We have science everyday.Sometimes we‘re go to the laboratory,and we usually stay at classroom and listen to our science teacher —Miss Zhang.I think she is smart and beautiful.
You can see,I‘m enjoying my new school!
So what about you,John?Can you write and tell me what you’re doing in your school in England?
Terry

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