请问这句话有语法问题吗?The main purpose of the painter can be interpreted in terms of a problem in the present education of our children.还是应该这样:The main purpose of the painter can be interpreted in terms of education Problems of our children at present.我想表达的意思是:这幅画作者的目的是想说明当前孩子的教育问题.

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请问这句话有语法问题吗?
The main purpose of the painter can be interpreted in terms of a problem in the present education of our children.
还是应该这样:
The main purpose of the painter can be interpreted in terms of education Problems of our children at present.
我想表达的意思是:这幅画作者的目的是想说明当前孩子的教育问题.

This painting is the author's purpose to explain the current education problem of children.

首先觉得这种翻法挺做作的, 是规定的格式么?
其次 建议改进为
.in terms of current educational issues on our children.