英语 语病.

问题描述:

英语 语病.
This morning I woke up at 6 o 'clock is to the kitchen for mom made a bowl of
beef and tomato noodles,mother looked at me as she do breakfast is very happy,
she finally put all eat noodles,very delicious,also say I grew up,not a kid,
can look after himself,I listened also very happy.
你们看一下有语病吗,总觉得不太对,一个小学生写的,让我帮他参谋一下.

语法错误太多,真是,
我的参考:This morning I woke up at 6 o 'clock,then I made a bowl of
beef and tomato noodles in the kitchen for mymom , mother looked at me for breakfast with happiness. Finallyshe ate up all of the noodles, she thought they were very delicious, andsaid I has grew up,not a kid at all,so Icould look after myself.After her words, I was really happy.