帮忙看看这段英文有错的么

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帮忙看看这段英文有错的么
Hello,everybody!My name is ××× and my English name is ×××.I'm in Class 1,Grade 1.I like listening to some English songs.My favourite song is WestLife's 《You Raise Me Up》.
Thank you!

No misakes.
Maybe you can change some of your sentences.(I mean the structure.) That will make you aticle wonderful.