帮忙看看这段英文有错的么
问题描述:
帮忙看看这段英文有错的么
Hello,everybody!My name is ××× and my English name is ×××.I'm in Class 1,Grade 1.I like listening to some English songs.My favourite song is WestLife's 《You Raise Me Up》.
Thank you!
答
No misakes.
Maybe you can change some of your sentences.(I mean the structure.) That will make you aticle wonderful.