请帮忙改改英语作文,谢谢!
请帮忙改改英语作文,谢谢!
忘了粘了，不好意思
Dear Mr. Brown,
I’m now safely backed home. Thank you very much for all kindness I got from you during my stay hope everything is fine with you there.
Now, I wonder whether I could ask you a favor. When I came back, I suddenly realized that I had left my English dictionary behind your place. It is a precious gift from my American teacher would you please be so kind as to send it back to me? I’ll pay for the postage. The dictionary probably is on the bookshelf in my bed room. It is the one with a red cover.
Thanks and all the best.
Yours
LI Hua.
发来啊,我汗死.作文忘发上了，现在补上了，请指教。Dear Mr. Brown,i'm already backed home now.Thank you very much for being kind to me. wish your life will be beautiful and everything will be fine!Now, could i ask you for a faver? i just realized that i had left my English dictionary behind your place when i came back home. It is a precious gift sent by my American teacher. Would you please send it to me ? i 'll pay for the postage. By the way, the dictionary is probablyon the bookshelf in my bed room. It is the one with red cover.Thank you very much!yoursLi Hua应该就是这样了，没有什么很大的错误，把顺序调调，更英语化点。我的母语不是英语，不可能完全无误，只有这样了，希望可以帮到你~！