求译“Sleep with the only one whole life,traversing many place together.”AND这句话有语法错误吗?

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求译“Sleep with the only one whole life,traversing many place together.”AND这句话有语法错误吗?
如果意译:“一生睡在一个人身旁,走过很多地方”怎么最地道、有味道?THANKS!

错处:in the whole life,要用介词in ,加上特指这一生the.其它地方都对.