英语改错 last sundayi witnessed a traffic accident on our way home.我崩溃了.英语改错 last sundayi witnessed a traffic accident on our way home.I was wandering down the sidewalk while went loud crash.这是前两句
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英语改错 last sundayi witnessed a traffic accident on our way home.我崩溃了.
英语改错 last sundayi witnessed a traffic accident on our way home.I was wandering down the sidewalk while went loud crash.
这是前两句
答
这位小友,
如果是一个人回家的话应该用 on my way home .当然如果上文出现一起回家的不止一人则用our是对的.
while 连接的两个动作表示同时发生,要用现在进行时.所以把went 改为going