一道高一英语短文改错题,共有十处错误 急………………Good afternoon ,everyone!I'm pleased to share my experience of learning English with you .It is known to all ,vocabulary is an important part of language learning .I usually memorize 20 new words a day and put it to use whenever possible.After class ,I often listen English programs on TV and on the radio.However ,I've learned a lot of from the Internet .Now ,I'd like to offersome advices on English learning .Firstly ,we shoul

1。我觉得I often listen English programs on TV and on the radio。 这一句话有问题。 逻辑思维不服。
2。把那个However，改成and。 3。advice是不可数名词，把那个s去掉就是。 4。把read后面加上Ing。 因为spend time （in）doing sth。

Good afternoon , everyone!
I'm pleased to share my experience of learning English with you .
It is known to all THAT vocabulary is an important part of language learning .
I usually memorize 20 new words a day and put THEM to use whenever possible.
After class , I often listen TO English programs on TV and on the radio.
However , I've learned a lot of (OF不要)from the Internet . Now , I'd like to offer
some ADVICE on English learning . Firstly , we should spend some time
READING interesting English books and magazines . Secondly , I suggest we
(SHOULD) HOLD more English activities . Thirdly , we should TALK in English as
often as POSSIBLE . I'm sure we'll MAKE great progress with these methods.
That's all . Thank you for listening,