帮忙改一下英语作文A student who is a freshman that have had a computer ,a MPfour when he com into the university.It spend much money buying it. Our class have had a heated discussion about the students.Opinions are divided into two.thinking the student have a rich family during his universities' life is better to buy these things.others hold the opposite opinion it is not good to make a good behave. As far asi am concerned,the student should take sile

帮忙改一下英语作文
A student who is a freshman that have had a computer ,a MPfour when he com into the university.It spend much money buying it.
Our class have had a heated discussion about the students.Opinions are divided into two.thinking the student have a rich family during his universities' life is better to buy these things.others hold the opposite opinion it is not good to make a good behave.
As far asi am concerned,the student should take silent attitudestwards the problem,and be thrifty,and study hard.
满分25,我们老师给我打了13分,我觉的不太好,可能是语法上和用词上有问题,帮忙改改,谢谢.