帮我看看我的英语作文有没有语法错误Everyone has their favorite stars.My favorite star is Zhou Jielun,because he sings songs very well.He is a good singer.I like he sings songs.he is famous for he is very working-hard.His life is very hard when he young .He uesd to be The people who work for others.Then there is a person to help him out of the first record.Can you tell me your favorite star.
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帮我看看我的英语作文有没有语法错误
Everyone has their favorite stars.My favorite star is Zhou Jielun,because he sings songs very well.
He is a good singer.I like he sings songs.he is famous for he is very working-hard.His life is very hard when he young .He uesd to be The people who work for others.Then there is a person to help him out of the first record.
Can you tell me your favorite star.
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