下面这段话怎么翻译成英文(外贸英语)JACK,你好!我们公司想定购2箱rutile sand.我们希望你能尽快把合约传真给我以便我能尽快开证(open the L/C).我们想与你保持长期合作所以请在价格上给与优惠.

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下面这段话怎么翻译成英文(外贸英语)
JACK,你好!
我们公司想定购2箱rutile sand.我们希望你能尽快把合约传真给我以便我能尽快开证(open the L/C).
我们想与你保持长期合作所以请在价格上给与优惠.

JACK, How are you!
Our company wants to order 2 boxes of rutile sands.We hope you can fax the contract to me as soon as possible so that I can open a certificate(the open the L/C) as soon as possible.
We want to keep a long-term cooperation with you so please give a special discount on the price.

个人认为楼上的翻译不错,其实都还可以

Dear Jack,
We want to order two boxes of rutile sand from you. We hope you can fax the contract to us so that I can open the L/C to you asap.
Besides, we sincerely hope that we can keep a long-term cooperation relationship with you. Would you please give us some discount?
Thank you and best regards!
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Hello ,Jack :
Our company wantsto order two boxes of rutile sand.We hope you can fax the contract to me ASAP so that we can open the L/C ASAP
We want to keep a long-term cooperation with you ,so Pls give us a special discount on the price .

Dear Jack,We want to order two boxes of rutile sand from you.We hope you can fax the contract to us so that I can open the L/C to you asap.Besides,we sincerely hope that we can keep a long-term cooper...