Besides,they will be bored to death and don't know what to do when they leave their phones or their phone batteries have run down because they have already been not able to adapt to the life without phone.这句话被提示语法不规范,希望大神指导一下哪里错误,怎样修改

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Besides,they will be bored to death and don't know what to do when they leave their phones or their phone batteries have run down because they have already been not able to adapt to the life without phone.这句话被提示语法不规范,希望大神指导一下哪里错误,怎样修改

Besides 是除...之外,还有...的意思,所以我认为这里用moreover/further更好。

batteries run down 就可以了,去掉have.
they have already been not able to adapt看起来有点儿别扭,很少见有这样表达的。改成they are no longer able to adapt to the life without phone.

将don't know改为won't know; 在their phone batteries 前面加一个when变成条件状语