这是我儿子的一则日记,有语法和时态错误的指出来.还没打完she was silent,and she had a smile on her face.the other girl on her right said:"we didn't like the windows open,did you have idea?we made you close to windows,you must close them.you had a big mouse.why were your words so much?you close your mouse.i didn't think of you say." .i thought of she is a bad student,i was silent,i didn't like speaking to her.waited a moment,i wanted to drink.some water fell down the ground when i

这是我儿子的一则日记,有语法和时态错误的指出来.还没打完
she was silent,and she had a smile on her face.the other girl on her right said:"we didn't like the windows open,did you have idea?we made you close to windows,you must close them.you had a big mouse.why were your words so much?you close your mouse.i didn't think of you say." .i thought of she is a bad student,i was silent,i didn't like speaking to her.waited a moment,i wanted to drink.some water fell down the ground when i drink.the girl said:"my foot had some water." then she threw a bottle to