短文改错、I visited my friend wang Lin today.Her parents went out.When it times to have lunch,Iasked him why we could eat out in restaurant .He said we would eat at home."I will cook," he said .I was surprising .How could he cook?He went into the kitchen ,following by me.He then started to prepare.I tried to help,but I could do nothing as I could as I had never cooked before.I watched him to cook.TO my surprise,he was really good in cooking.After lunch,I a

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短文改错、I visited my friend wang Lin today.Her parents went out.When it times to have lunch,I
asked him why we could eat out in restaurant .He said we would eat at home."I will cook," he said .I was surprising .How could he cook?He went into the kitchen ,following by me.He then started to prepare.I tried to help,but I could do nothing as I could as I had never cooked before.I watched him to cook.TO my surprise,he was really good in cooking.After lunch,I asked him why he learent to cook."My parents went busy with their work.I wanted to do anything for them ,so I learnt cooking,"he says.He set a good example to me.共9处错误

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I visited my friend wang Lin today.Her parents went out.When it was time (times) to have lunch,I asked him that (why) we could eat out in restaurant .He said we would eat at home."I will cook," he said .I was surprised (surprising) .How could he cook? He went into the kitchen ,followed (following) by me.He then started to prepare.I tried to help,but I could do nothing because (as I could as) I had never cooked before.I watched him cook (to cook).TO my surprise,he was really good at in (good in) cooking.After lunch,I asked him why he learnt (learent) to cook."My parents were (went) busy with their work.I wanted to do something (anything) for them ,so I learnt cooking,"he says.He set a good example to me.

1. When it times to have lunch-------改为 When it was time to have lunch
2. I was surprising---------改为 I was surprised
3. following by me ----- 改为 followed by me
4. but I could do nothing as I could -------- 去掉as I could
5. I watched him to cooking ------ 改为 I watched him cooking
6. I asked him why he learent to cook ------ 改为 I asked him why he learnt cooking
7. My parents went busy with their work ---- 改为 My parents were busy with their work
8. I wanted to do anything for them ---- 改为 I wanted to do something for them
9. He set a good example to me ---- 改为 He set a good example for me