鉴定下Good afternoon!Thank you all for your support and help during the time.and Ms yang yunzhi aDear All,Also,yang yun zhi will be in charge of daily operation during my absence.If you have any request ,pls send e-mail or contact us directly,thanks.yang yun zhi Mobile:136-1265- 3722Tel:0769-8330-8523-8072 E-mail:"羊运芝" Sorry to cause you all inconvenience MOATECH Wuwen看看通顺不
鉴定下Good afternoon!Thank you all for your support and help during the time.and Ms yang yunzhi a
Dear All,
Also,yang yun zhi will be in charge of daily operation during my absence.If you have any request ,pls send e-mail or contact us directly,thanks.
yang yun zhi Mobile:136-1265- 3722
Tel:0769-8330-8523-8072
E-mail:"羊运芝"
Sorry to cause you all inconvenience
MOATECH Wuwen
看看通顺不
Dear All,
Also, yang yun zhi (建议用She,以免啰嗦）will be in charge of daily operation during my absence.If you have any request （建议改成question), pls send e-mail （必须加不定冠词en,整句也可以说pls e-mail ,e-mail 直接做动词,更显简洁）or contact us directly, thanks.
yang yun zhi （要写成所有格形式） Mobile: 136-1265- 3722
Tel: 0769-8330-8523-8072
E-mail: "羊运芝"
Sorry to cause you all inconvenience !（建议改成：sorry for bringing you any inconvenience,客套话,未必就是发生了的事实,原句Sorry to听起来好像是为尚未发生的的事情致歉）
MOATECH Wuwen
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