I had fun with my mom.On Monday we went to park.On Tuesday we climbed a mountain.On Wednesday wecleaned room.On Thursday we visited my grandparents.On Friday we back home.请大家看看这篇小短文有什么问题,望各位英语能手,能帮我看一下.
问题描述:
I had fun with my mom.On Monday we went to park.On Tuesday we climbed a mountain.On Wednesday we
cleaned room.On Thursday we visited my grandparents.On Friday we back home.请大家看看这篇小短文有什么问题,望各位英语能手,能帮我看一下.
答
I feel so happy to be with my mother.On Monday we went to the park.On Tuesday we climbed the mountain.On Wednesday we cleaned the room. On Thursday I visited my grandparents with my mother. On Friday we returned home.
答
rome最好要加s,最后一句为we came back home.开头改为:I had a good time with my mother last week.还少结尾:How wonderful!