求指点语法错误：Shanghai is very hot these days, the temperature always around 38 degrees.我写的日记,大概是说上海最近很热,大家避暑的方式,以及我的职业是做海景酒店租赁,暑假父母带着孩子一起去海边度假方面的内容. 请看看有没有语法错误,谢谢哦Shanghai is very hot these days, the temperature always around 38 degrees. People always beat heat by travelling to the seaside, swimming and staying in the air-condition room.I engaged in hotel rental business, mainly in seaview hotel's rental. Because of the summer vacation, every year in Jul

求指点语法错误：Shanghai is very hot these days, the temperature always around 38 degrees.
我写的日记,大概是说上海最近很热,大家避暑的方式,以及我的职业是做海景酒店租赁,暑假父母带着孩子一起去海边度假方面的内容. 请看看有没有语法错误,谢谢哦


Shanghai is very hot these days, the temperature always around 38 degrees. People always beat heat by travelling to the seaside, swimming and staying in the air-condition room.

I engaged in hotel rental business, mainly in seaview hotel's rental. Because of the summer vacation, every year in July and August was the busy season for the seaview hotel business. Parents like to take their children to go on holiday together, it would help to promote the relationship between parents and their children.

If you have a vacation , you can go to the seaside and have a nice holiday with your family.