she stopped him and asked him the train would arrive and when the train would leave for london中文

问题描述:

she stopped him and asked him the train would arrive and when the train would leave for london中文

这句话有语病,太冗长,不通顺。应该改为:
She stopped him and asked when the train would arrive and leave for London.
她拦住他,询问火车什么时候到站,什么时候去伦敦。

她阻止了他并且问他火车是否会来,什么时候开往伦敦。
祝学业有成!

她叫住他并问他去伦敦的火车什么时候能到站什么时候开出

她拦住他并问他去伦敦的火车什么时候到和什么时候离开。