Growing population make an increasing number of city become full of people这句话有语序和语法上的错误吗?有的话请改正.

The growing population has caused that the city has became more crowded.
这样改比较好。

语法完全错误.
想要表达中文意思: 越来越多的人口使得越来越多的城市到处是人(变得拥挤)
可考虑这样表达：
Growing population makes more and more cities full of people.或
Growing population makes more and more cities more and more crowdy.

错
It is caused by the growing poplution that the number of city filled with people rises.

a number of后肯定是复数啊，表达也太中式了

Growing population makes an increasing number of city with millions of people.

有问题，润色：
More and more cities are filled with people because of the growing population.

这句话从语法上分析没有错误,但是读起来挺别扭,一般象这种表示由什么什么引起的句子,一般都是用by+原因 放在句末,你这个句子一看就是咱中国人的思维,如果是鬼子说,肯定要用 by growing population 放在句末
an increasing number of这个用的倒没有什么错误,但是后面的city应该用复数形式cities
become full of people 这个是错误的,city 怎么能变成 people呢?如果说城市里塞满了人,直接用full of people就行了 被动语态的话用 be filled with people
时态我觉得用现在进行时会表达的更好一些,表明正在发生的一个过程
所以给你改改,An increasing number of cities are being filled with people by growing population.或者 are filled with
如果你觉得把growing population放在最前面好点,那就说
Growing population make an increasing number of cities full of people.这样也行,不过比较平淡.

Growing population makes an increasing number of cities full of people.