麻烦大家帮我修改下语法句型的问题

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麻烦大家帮我修改下语法句型的问题
Aina’s life was full of adventures and even precarious,but Aina’s free-will and independence overcame these difficult situations.Her spirit of pursuing a better life should be encouraged to most women who had lost their own lives and continuously lived in their misfortunes.The desire of free themselves should not be limited by anything or anyone.

Aina’s life was full of adventures and even precarious,but her free-will(这个词有点奇怪,你想表达的中文是什么?) and independence helped her overcome all the difficulties.Most women who had failed in their own lives and continuously lived in misfortunes should be encouraged to possess the spirit of pursuing a better life just like Aina did.The desire for freedom should not be limited by anything or anyone.