八年级英语作文,关于友谊的作文,

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八年级英语作文,关于友谊的作文,
AN FORGETABLE THING
everyone has his can't forget thing.friendship may be the most impotant thing in our life .
it's like a linght give us bright .ihave mary things that i can't rorget with my friends.
one day ,i shawed a new watch my best friend .the watch is very pretty and i like it very much.when i passed it to her ,she dropped it and the watch crashed into pieces .i shcuted to her.i don't want to see you again .she cned at once after school ,i fiund a pretty pencilcase inmy desk .in the pencit case ,i found a note whichsaid:"dear cristine ,i gave this to you because i don'twant to lose you .can you forgive me?"i was moved by the note and i felt regre with my words i said sorry to her and we were closer than before .a friend is like a star in sky .he always is there around you i can't forget this thing forever.

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AN UNFORGETTABLE THING
Everyone has his unforgettable thing.Friendship may be the most impotant thing in our life.
It's like a light that gives us brightness.I have many things that I can't forget with my friends.
One day,I showed a new watch to my best friend.The watch is very pretty and I like it very much.When I passed it to her,she dropped it and the watch crashed into pieces.I shouted to her:I don't want to see you again.She cried at once after school.I found a pretty pencil case in my desk.In the pencil case,I found a note which said:"Dear Cristine,I gave this to you because I don't want to lose you.Can you forgive me?" I was moved by the note and I felt regret with my words.I said sorry to her and we were closer than before.A friend is like a star in the sky.He (She) is always there around you.I can't forget this thing forever.