看看我英文作文中有没有错误·I think children who have freedom can have more space to think than the children who are forced to do anything.我想表达：拥有*的孩子比那些总是*去做某事的孩子有更多思考的空间.
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看看我英文作文中有没有错误·
I think children who have freedom can have more space to think than the children who are forced to do anything.
我想表达：拥有*的孩子比那些总是*去做某事的孩子有更多思考的空间.
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I believe that children with freedom can have more space to think than those who are forced to do things.
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一看就是错的！
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I visited my friend at afterafterl.这一句去掉中间 at .直接就是 after school .Then I went to home .这句去掉中间的to.go home 就是回家的意思了,不用加介词to了.
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嗯,语法没有大错,建议将后面的the children改成those,避免重复,前面children改成the children,因为后面有后置定语从句,是特定的"孩子",要用定冠词的
think后面最好加一个something,更好些
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I think the children who have freedom can have more space to think something than those who are forced to do them.