Dear Jenny

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Dear Jenny
How are you?How is the weather in England?
Today is our fist day at school after the holidays.I have new timetable at school.Let me tell you about it.I have English ,Chinese and Maths lessons every day.My favourite subject is Chinese ,but I like English,too.Which subject do you like best?I'm good at Chinese.I have Geography on Tuesdays and Fridays.I have Computer Studies on Fridany evenings.The Computer Studies are not fun.Now,we're talking about summer holiday.I study English in the holiday.How about you?
I'm hearing from you soon.
Yours
Linda
1.in the holiday对吗?要不定冠词吗?
2.Now,we're talking about summer holiday.I study English in the holiday.How about you?这句话可以这么说吗?
3.I have new timetable at school.Let me tell you about it.有语法错误么?
4.I have Computer Studies on Fridany evenings这句话中后面的Fridany evenings可以吗?
这封信的意思是今天是放假后开学的第一天。暑假是过去的了。为什么在第二题中,有会用I studied English,为什么要加ed.还有一个I’ll study English during this holiday。I‘ll不是将来时的吗?

1.介词应该用during.
2.这句话一看就是中国式英语,不地道.可以说:I study English during the holiday.I wonder if you don't mind telling me what do you do during this period of time.
3.new前面需要冠词a,you后面加something.
4.可以.