麻烦给看一下这篇文章有没有语法错误

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麻烦给看一下这篇文章有没有语法错误
In my eyes,love everywhere,whether it is in reality,or network,there is love.but different people have different standpoint about love,so the key of what’s the true love is mainly to see how you treat it.i think love a person wants to trust each other,love a person wants to mutual understanding and love a person wants to respect each other's thinking and assertive.it is said that love is not for long,I think that is wrong.have a long time to love,because you do not have the time to protect love.just like vingo's wife in the text,she is a good woman in my eyes.when his husband was in jail,she didn’t give up him,and she brang their children up by herself.i think we can even use the“great”to describe her .also,form these,we can recognize how sturdy their love is.so never give up just is the true love in my eyes.

有些地方不懂你想表达什么,只能改成这样,将就下吧
In my opinion, love is everywhere, whether in reality or network, there is love. But different people have different opinions about love; the key point to love is mainly to see how you treat it. I think to love a person have to trust each other and mutual understanding, to respect each other's thoughts and differences. Someone says that love is not forever, but I don’t think so. We have a long time to love, because we can protect our loves, just like Vingo's wife in the text. She is a nice woman, when her husband was in jail, she didn’t give up, and brought up their children by herself. I think we can use one word to describe her -- great. And from these, we can recognize how great their love is. So I think the true love is never give up.