求高手帮我改下英语作文 有什么不足的或者错误指点下,帮我改改

求高手帮我改下英语作文 有什么不足的或者错误指点下,帮我改改
求大侠帮帮忙 我的作文：MY TEACHER
When I was in childhood,in many people's eyes,I was a bad boy who always didn't abide by school's regulars,usually appealed to force or assassinated their characters if somebody didn't obey with what I said
I was studying in school A affiliated to school B where I meet the first and important teacher---Miss Chen who was great to my appetite as a teacher in my mind and I was in awe of. When she meet us at the first time,she said:"From now on, I will be your president,If you have any problems in your living or studying,I will help you and try to put across how to solve them."and at the same time,she appeal to us that we must aid one another and develop our morally intellectually phsycally and esthetically.
Although I had many faults Miss Chen didn't think I was so bad .She encouraged me and let me undertake the monitor of our class.From that day,I was getting around to thinking about what I must do and what I shouldn't do.Eventually,I become a good boy and all out to study when the examination was coming around.At last,I got all but the greatest achievement in my class.
Thank you!Miss Chen!