谁能把这篇作文翻译成英语
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谁能把这篇作文翻译成英语
今年暑假Jimmy去了上海,这是他第一次去上海,非常兴奋.David已经带她游览了世博,Jimmy最喜欢中国馆.David还带他去了外滩,景色很美.Jimmy已经呆了俩个星期,他玩得很开心.
答
Jimmy came to Shanghai this summer vavation.It was his first time to go to Shanghai that she felt very execited.David brought her to visit the World Exhibition and her favorite is the Chinese Site.David also took her to the Bund and the sights were brilliant.
Jimmy has stayed there for two weeks and she really had a good time.